Microfantasy Monday, week 25 : suction

Microfantasy Monday is a weekly writing exercise brought to us by Ang, the Sweltering Celt. This week’s theme is “Suction”

She’s leaning against the wall and I’m leaning into her with my hips. We’re creating a bottleneck along the catwalk, the club is crowded and noisy and people are squeezing by us.  I’m barely aware of anyone else, though, my universe is limited to her and specifically, her lips.  She’s taking long, slow deliberate drinks, lips pursed around the straw, eyes taunting me, finally draining the glass and setting it aside. My palms are against the wall, holding myself back but as I look into her eyes, I can feel her desire pulling me in. Soon my fingers are in her hair and my mouth is on hers. Our tongues dart around, teasing, testing, probing and then she takes hold of mine, sucking it firmly into her mouth. I flash on the image of her lips wrapped around the straw of her drink and how I wondered what it would feel like to have those lips wrapped around me.

I’m falling into her, unable to stop myself, her mouth drawing me in deeply. My mind is spinning, the only thing in that noisy, crowded bar I can focus on is her.  She’s a whirlpool and I’ve given in, not fighting to stay above water anymore, letting the suction pull me down.


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8 Responses to Microfantasy Monday, week 25 : suction

  1. vanimp says:

    Oh that set the scene nicely! That sensation of complete focus on one person inamongst a crowded place, and the thoughts that wander. Quite delicious! x

  2. Dragon Mage says:

    Amazing. I love the feeling of being alone with another person in a crowd. Beautifully written.

  3. FemmeBLT says:

    Well done, indeed. I love the different takes on this theme. We could have ALL gone in one direction, couldn’t we? 😉

  4. Dracona says:

    Ohhh very nice…those are the kind of kisses that do exactly what you described, make everything else disappear.

  5. Roxy says:

    Mmmm…and you did exactly that…everyone else faded away as you pulled me to you.

    And that thing I do with the straw….? Not at all on purpose, not even to suck you in…. 😉

  6. SweetSpiced says:

    Very sexy imagery Kyle! Love the flashback! (sure it isn’t Roxy *grin*)

  7. Jen says:

    I love the suction theme. Perfect.

  8. I was pretty sure this was a true story about a certain blonde hottie, and then I read Roxy’s comment. Super hot. I’m envious of the BOTH of you. 😉

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